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Mage Applications / Re: Stellan_Paxton l Arete 1 l Avatar Rating 1| Orphan.
« Last post by Rudy on March 17, 2018, 03:42:16 PM »
Denied as you don't know the basics of MtA.
Demon Applications / Re: Nicholas_Grey ;; Namaru ;; Ravener - Demon Application
« Last post by Rudy on March 17, 2018, 02:10:28 PM »

Still an invalid capabilities allocation. As a Demon player, you should be able to understand a simple system such as Apocalyptic Form Capabilities.
Demon Applications / Re: Ray_Marlow ;; Halaku ;; Cryptic - Demon Application
« Last post by Rudy on March 17, 2018, 01:57:59 PM »

That's not how apocalyptic form capabilities work. You went for a Halaku and took the most offensive Lore in the game line yet you don't know a very basic DtF system.

Demon is an exclusive race and Halaku is for advanced DtF players, definitely not for you.
Hybrid Applications / Re: [Elijah_Benjamin] [8th] [Caitiff] [Fostern]
« Last post by Rudy on March 17, 2018, 01:53:15 PM »
Denied. The story bring up more questions than it gives answers. Grammar is bad. This can't be accepted even as a 8th Generation Vampire. You're aimed too high.
Auctions / Re: [Business Auction] The Asylum
« Last post by Simon on March 17, 2018, 11:29:28 AM »
Silvio Frei Barone has won the auction. PM Rudy the business ID, name, type, market price and final bid.
Mage Applications / Re: Triss Holler | Arete 4 | Avatar Rating 4 | Virtual Adept
« Last post by Gaavia on March 16, 2018, 08:34:49 PM »
Okay, so after reading your reply I made major changes to the story, made it more realistic, she's 10 years older than she was previously. I looked over everything you said,  I changed the questions accordingly and now i'm going to answer some questions that you've asked.

Stratos is going to be a background, a familiar companion; a data beast, an info elemental. Nothing much to it, the elemental inserted itself into one of her AI program's she has been creating and thats how he came to be.

When it comes to the story, there's a few things that needs to be understanded, the format of the story is meant to be this way, thats why theres alot of spoilers, each little spoiler is a little file that you find. Not every single detail is included because of the route I took to write this story, it includes major events and important things. This isn't meant to show literally everything. Her avatar doesn't show itself for multiple reasons, to her the avatar doesn't a physical form, it doesn't have a 'voice' per se, information is what she believes the avatar is, every little bit of her avatar comes to her as information, the power of the avatar itself is displayed in one of her seekings, not only is she brought PHYSICALLY somewhere else but she's brought into the grid itself, she's given an icon and she's quite literally transported into a corrupted web which is no easy task to begin with.

If theres anything else that needs to be changed let me know but I think for the most part this should be complete.
Character Profiles / Re: Jacques Philippe Toulouse Moreau [WIP]
« Last post by Hal on March 16, 2018, 07:36:38 PM »
Character Profiles / Re: Jacques Philippe Toulouse Moreau [WIP]
« Last post by $hadow on March 16, 2018, 07:32:07 PM »
Mage Applications / Re: Damon Grey | Arete 3 | Avatar Rating 4 | Order of Hermes
« Last post by Iron on March 16, 2018, 06:55:17 PM »
The story is fixed more or less to my liking. I'd add a bit more about how he obtained his powers through training.

As long as you are confident enough to RP such a character in-game I am ok with it.

Wait for Diplo's response or Rudy's.
Character Profiles / Re: Jacques Philippe Toulouse Moreau [WIP]
« Last post by Hades on March 16, 2018, 05:35:16 PM »
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