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Black Skull
« on: July 07, 2016, 03:59:00 PM »
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Theme Song - Gonna Fly Now

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Spoiler for earlier:

Rad appearing with his black skull mask and his daily outfit


Rad with or without his black skull mask
"To become a man, I must be a man. It's up to us, will us chose to act, or to watch."
Rad is a man with great will to overcome evil and cleanse the world from darkness.

He acts as a vigilante, the one who becomes the support pillars from darkness.

About
Full Name: Radinal Dillion
Nickname: The Slugger Rad
Gender: Male
Age: 18 years old
Nationality: American
Occupation: Boxer, Vigilante

Appearance
Ethnicity: White
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Height: 178 cm
Weight: 78 kg.

Social
Parents: William Dillion (Deceased), Slyva Dillion (Deceased)
Siblings: Charles Dillion (Unknown)
Relationships: With Parents: None, With Siblings: None.
Martial Status: Single
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Archtypes
Demeanor: Conformist
- The Conformist is a follower, taking another’s lead and finding security in the decisions of others. She prefers not to take charge, instead seeking to throw in with the rest of the group and lend her own unique aid. The Conformist is drawn to the most dynamic personality or the individual she perceives to be the “best.” Being a Conformist is not necessarily a bad thing — every group needs followers to lend stability to their causes. Groupies, party voters, and “the masses” are Conformist Archetypes.
Nature: Director
- To the Director, nothing is worse than chaos and disorder. The Director seeks to be in charge, adopting a “my way or the highway” attitude on matters of decision-making. The Director is more concerned with bringing order out of strife, however, and need not be truly “in control” of a group to guide it. Coaches, teachers, and many political figures exemplify the Director Archetype.


Relations
[] Wanted Dead
[] Extreme hate
[] Hate
[] Untrusted
[] Neutral
[] Friendly
[] Extremely Friendly
[] Deepest Trust
[] Loved one


Jakey -
 "You are my best friend."
Corey the Ninja -
 "You have shown me that, above sky, there are still another sky."
Hunter Whitewood -
 "We will build RCBA, together."
 "No Hunter, no happiness in life"
 "From all the things we've been through, you've proven you're the best of the best. Words can't express, simply put, you're my best friend."
Dak -
 "Thank you, for your gift."
 "I don't know...this feeling...I feel you somewhat so important to me."
 "My life is yours."
Frost -
 "AS COLD AS FROST."
Alex -
 "Unique lad. He seems like he is able to do a lot of stuffs. I am really interested to get to know with him."
Eva -
 "I had no purpose until you came in town."



Goals
- Find a girlfriend


Trivia
Does he smoke? No
Does he drink? No
Is he aware of supernaturals? Yes

Likes
- Exercising
- Fighting
- Other boxers
- Flirting with young ladies

Dislikes
- A carjacker failing his job
- Public threats



Stereotypes
Vampires - "Dak and a couple of friends are the only reason I stay with them."

Ghouls - "Only one actually gained my respect, the rest are weaklings."

Werewolves - "Disgusting dogs."

Normals - "They are nothing but ungrateful creatures. Well, except for some."

Demons - "Shameful to see them even lurk our world."
« Last Edit: July 06, 2017, 01:57:58 AM by FiryalYay »

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2016, 04:00:08 PM »
Sorry for the messy CP. This is my first CP.
Thanks to all reply, suggestion, critics, and everything.
I am sorry if I don't reply to your replies.

EDITS:
1. Edited font colors from blue to teal
2. Added some quotation, and small information
3. Added "Trivia" and "Boxing", moved "Awareness of Supernaturals" from "About" to "Trivia"
« Last Edit: July 08, 2016, 04:29:32 AM by FiryalYay »

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2016, 04:00:30 PM »
To Do List:
Well, there are still so much to do, but these came outta my mind and I consider the most important.

1. Write a (detailed) character story.
2. Find a new photograph of Rad, the current one made him look like a man on his late age

« Last Edit: July 08, 2016, 04:33:10 AM by FiryalYay »

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2016, 04:02:02 PM »
Good human; Not like LeonTime's.

I actually like this character.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2016, 04:03:22 PM »
Why does he look like he's in his late thirties early forties?

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2016, 04:03:57 PM »
Good human; Not like LeonTime's.

I actually like this character.
Thanks man.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2016, 04:05:16 PM »
Why does he look like he's in his late thirties early forties?
Lol I'm aware of that. Might change his picture, but for now, that's the best I can find.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #7 on: July 07, 2016, 04:10:55 PM »
Please change the blue color, it's nearly impossible to read. Other than that, it looks alright.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #8 on: July 07, 2016, 04:12:28 PM »
Please change the blue color, it's nearly impossible to read. Other than that, it looks alright.

thanks for the suggestion, man.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #9 on: July 07, 2016, 04:20:36 PM »
ye, looks like a decent human char

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #10 on: July 07, 2016, 04:21:50 PM »
ye, looks like a decent human char
thanks man. i'm planning to /keep/ this char unaware of supernatural. well, as long as i can.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #11 on: July 07, 2016, 04:22:31 PM »
You should request an admin to organize story events for you. Actually get into a real boxing competition, rise through the rankings.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #12 on: July 07, 2016, 04:27:38 PM »
You should request an admin to organize story events for you. Actually get into a real boxing competition, rise through the rankings.
yeah, tought about that. maybe that need some efforts to do, but will be a good addition.

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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #13 on: July 07, 2016, 04:39:50 PM »
Good human; Not like LeonTime's.

I actually like this character.
You're really hate me that much.

Nice one, buddy.
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Re: Rad Dillion [WIP]
« Reply #14 on: July 07, 2016, 04:44:33 PM »
You should request an admin to organize story events for you. Actually get into a real boxing competition, rise through the rankings.
yeah, tought about that. maybe that need some efforts to do, but will be a good addition.
You don't really need to wait for an admin, virtually anyone can storytell for you. That'd be a really good opportunity for development and exp.