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Vampire Applications / Re: Jack_Morelock ;; 12th ;; Malkavian
« Last post by Kerdav24 on Today at 12:13:34 PM »
Fix the formatting, remove color tags and add more to the story.
Added a bit more to a story [although it still looks small I know], and removed the color tags.
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Vampire Applications / Re: Liam Godman ;; 12th Gen ;; Brujah
« Last post by Liam_Godman on Today at 10:09:59 AM »
Edited
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Vampire Applications / Re: Liam Godman ;; 12th Gen ;; Brujah
« Last post by Raven Corella on Today at 09:51:34 AM »
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Who enforces them and how do the vampires view it?


I don't need wikipedia quotes of what each tradition dictates.
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Vampire Applications / Re: Liam Godman ;; 12th Gen ;; Brujah
« Last post by Liam_Godman on Today at 09:43:36 AM »
Hope everything is alright now.
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Well, I'd like to see some resistance from Frank. Unless he was knocked out cold he would've tried to do at least something, in spite of the damages incurred in the previous fight.

An elder wouldn't casually let his defenses down nor run about with 2 bloodpoints in his system to a point where he can't even mist form or shift in a dangerous situation.
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Vampire Applications / Re: Jack_Morelock ;; 12th ;; Malkavian
« Last post by Raven Corella on Today at 09:22:15 AM »
Fix the formatting, remove color tags and add more to the story.
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Vampire Applications / Re: Liam Godman ;; 12th Gen ;; Brujah
« Last post by Raven Corella on Today at 09:13:50 AM »
Revise the second and third questions. Antitribu aren't necessarily a separate bloodline, they simply denote that a vampire goes against the usual direction of the clan as a whole.

For question two and three, read the entire question properly and make sure to answer everything.
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Character Stories / Re: so i was writing a diablerie story..
« Last post by Carl on September 20, 2018, 10:01:22 PM »
Nice story, putted some emphasis on some expressions which gives it a little bit of surprise to the story.

Well done, nicely made!
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Character Stories / Re: so i was writing a diablerie story..
« Last post by Jeffrey Gain on September 20, 2018, 05:06:03 PM »
A very interesting story not gonna lie, I was intrigued while reading it.

keep dat shit up
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Character Stories / Re: so i was writing a diablerie story..
« Last post by Coeus on September 20, 2018, 10:19:20 AM »
Cute, someone has mommy issues
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