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Wolf In Sheep's Clothing.
« on: June 12, 2017, 09:04:05 AM »



Name: John Morgan.
Nicknames: Flash.
Age: Twenty four (24).
Place of birth: Palomino Creek, state of San Andreas.
Nature: Caregiver.
Spoiler for Explanation:
You always try to help those around you, struggling to make a difference in the needs and sorrows of the unfortunate. People around you depend on your stability and strength to keep them steady and centered. You are the one people turn to when they have a problem.
Demeanor: Loner.
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You are the type of person who is always alone, even in the midst of a crowd. You are the wanderer, hunter and lone wolf. Though others might think of you as lonely, forsaken, isolated or remote, in truth you prefer your own company to that of others. There are many different reasons why this might be so: you don't understand people, you understand people too well, people dislike you, people like you too much, or you are simply lost in your own thoughts. Your reasons are your own.
Affilation: Himself.


Ethnicity: Caucasian.
Race: Ghoul
Hair colour: Completely black.
Eye colour: Mint Green.
Distinguishing features: His leather gloves, his eyes, speech, high appearance.
Height: 192 cm's.
Weight: 83 kg's.


Parents: Robert Morgan & Michelle Redwood.
Siblings: Jack Morgan.
Relationship with parents: Good.
Relationship with sibling: Good.
Marital status: Single.
Sexual orientation: Heterosexual.
Children: None.


Does he smoke?: No.
Does he drink alcohol?: No.
Is religious?: Aetheist.
Aware of supernaturals?: Possesses advanced knowledge.

Likes:
 - Brawls.
 - Silence.
 - Charismatic people.
 - Melee weapons.
Dislikes:
 - Vampire's upset attitude to ghouls.
 Seriously some of you actually take us as living creatures but half of you take us as slaves.
 - Black spiral dancers.
 - Addiction to vampire's blood.

Goals/dreams: Survive.
Temperament: He is mostly calm and keeps no facial expression, being serious. He is a bit shy, but mostly it is not seen.

About him: Physically strong, powerful, quick and resistant to pain.
« Last Edit: November 01, 2017, 04:30:46 PM by FewLeonTime »
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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2017, 09:17:06 AM »
Pick a side god dammit what is this made for mephisto's eyes or something

"Children: Is not a pedophile." makes no sense and if it's meant to be a joke it aint funny

the blood rule substitute is too big, either resize or don't put as many of them

there u go constructive criticism


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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2017, 09:24:40 AM »
Pick a side god dammit what is this made for mephisto's eyes or something

"Children: Is not a pedophile." makes no sense and if it's meant to be a joke it aint funny

the blood rule substitute is too big, either resize or don't put as many of them

there u go constructive criticism
He is only 12 stahp Rayvenh!

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2017, 09:44:38 AM »
I don't know what normal man walks around with "magenta" eyes... But more power to you.

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2017, 10:24:56 AM »
I don't know what normal man walks around with "magenta" eyes... But more power to you.
Eyes will be explained down.
Pick a side god dammit what is this made for mephisto's eyes or something

"Children: Is not a pedophile." makes no sense and if it's meant to be a joke it aint funny

the blood rule substitute is too big, either resize or don't put as many of them

there u go constructive criticism

Raven m8, I will listen to u, and I wanted to make ppl happy and laugh instead of contributing toxicity literally everywhere, starting from Armaros. From what I heard, he made Fox suicide or smth. (I hope he doesn't.)

I will edit blood rule, ok.
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Now about eyes. There is a physical flaw in MtA (if i'm not wrong) distinguishing characteristics. I'm planning to apply for some merits and flaws, that's why I made John have these eyes. And no - I'm not stepping on my old faults just like I did with different eyes and red ones. I want to do it realistically even in WoD (that is full of vampires, werewolves, mages, etc.), If I will get denied on my merit application for this flaw, I will immeditealy remove this, because I had doubts about this too.

I understand your constructive criticism and it's much better than Armaros. Thanks! Much appreciated.
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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2017, 10:29:42 AM »
Updated.
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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2017, 12:02:38 PM »
Leon..overall it is okay-ish, but god damn dude, make a normal character ffs.

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #7 on: June 12, 2017, 12:40:09 PM »
Leon..overall it is okay-ish, but god damn dude, make a normal character ffs.
no sir
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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2017, 01:10:56 PM »
Nice bio.You surely deserve a nobel with for the player with the most characters in the server xD

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2017, 01:48:31 PM »
Nice bio.You surely deserve a nobel with for the player with the most characters in the server xD
Wrong, that's Dove

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #10 on: June 12, 2017, 02:49:35 PM »
Improvement is key, Leon. This is the product of you getting better, and I respect that. To be fair, this is by far the best character you  came up with.

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #11 on: June 12, 2017, 02:51:13 PM »
Improvement is key, Leon. This is the product of you getting better, and I respect that. To be fair, this is by far the best character you  came up with.

I couldn't agree more about this!
Congratulations! And the best CP you've ever made by far!
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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #12 on: June 12, 2017, 03:12:58 PM »
Thanks!
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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #13 on: June 12, 2017, 04:57:14 PM »
his suit got ruined pretty bad the other day

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Re: The man in suit.
« Reply #14 on: June 12, 2017, 08:30:55 PM »
his suit got ruined pretty bad the other day
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