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Character Profiles / Re: Brother Jonas
« Last post by Kingjohnrocks on January 16, 2017, 08:43:35 PM »
Relations updated
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Vampire Applications / Re: Aun Firebrand ;; Generation Six ;; Clan Ventrue
« Last post by FewLeonTime on January 16, 2017, 08:17:47 PM »
Format accepted.
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Vampire Applications / Re: Aun Firebrand ;; Generation Six ;; Clan Ventrue
« Last post by Duncan on January 16, 2017, 08:03:29 PM »
I made that better now.
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Character Profiles / Re: Vanessa Hamilton
« Last post by FewLeonTime on January 16, 2017, 07:53:16 PM »
i just can't wait to start murdering vampires over breaking the simple law of no erp

does that entail all forms of sex Flavberg? the reason I ask is because I had a character that was taken advantage of by a vampire.

if i were a racemod and i'd see you erp as a vampire with other vampires or humans without a valid reason such as feeding or manipulating

i'd fucking remove that race dude

this isn't twilight vampire fantasy
why? can't a vampyr have a daddy dom relationship with a mortal? toreadors are into this shit
If toreadors not doing it for manipulating, they can't.
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Vampire Applications / Re: Aun Firebrand / Generation Six / Clan Ventrue
« Last post by FewLeonTime on January 16, 2017, 05:28:37 PM »
Entire application is made in dialog form.Let admin decide. Also, you need to fix format.


EDIT:
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Aun Firebrand / Generation Six / Clan Ventrue
It's wrong.
Here is a correct one.
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Aun Firebrand ;; 6th Generation ;; Ventrue
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Vampire Applications / Re: Aun Firebrand / Generation Six / Clan Ventrue
« Last post by Flavberg on January 16, 2017, 01:39:31 PM »
There is dialogue everywhere because it is written in the form of a play. Like, if you've ever read Macbeth...I decided to go a different route with the OOC questions and conjoin them with the story. If you read it, it is still answering the questions in its entirety. Unless you're talking about the color, I don't have to make it easy for you to read at all, you're supposed have an eye keen enough to sift through the information I display and make a decision on whether I know what I'm talking about or not. And I know you can do this, but you're acting lazy or something, or maybe you just don't like the color. You're literally implying that actually being taught from your sire in the story is less efficient than this, what I see TOO OFTEN.

"and so my sire taught me everything, about my clan, about history of vampires, and anything i needed to know"

You see dialogue everywhere cause you didn't read nothin', or perhaps you didn't see "ACT ONE". Plays have acts. Plays focus on...DIALOGUE. You're also implying that plays do not tell stories...Shakespeare Shakespeare Shakespeare

I find it extremely saddening to hear that you do not like my story and that you'd rather it be brief. I spent a long time on it, and i don't think I should be penalized for for making a longer story, especially if the quality is good. There are people getting penalized for having stories 1500+ but not being up to par with their selected generation, so is it really such a bad thing that i took the time to perfect a story that i believe deserves my selected generation? Is it really a bad thing that, instead of going the usual way with answering the beginning OOC questions, I took it upon myself to include this as a story part as well in order to further deepen my character as well as fully display my understanding of the race as well as the ability to see these things from TWO characters points of view while SUBLIMINALLY placing mine in as well, and demonstrating my proficiency in the information?

Thaumaturgy I could have elaborated on a bit father, but I stand by what I said for Fortitude. If someone gets shot five times on the street, they shouldn't be up and walking within 5 minutes. Or perhaps I wrote it wrong, because what I meant was that Fortitude should not visibly be exhibited in public. Thats why, as you can see, I said at the end "Best play dead." This is obviously me saying, if you do get shot or something of the like, you can use fortitude, but it'd behoove you to make it look like you are mortally wounded. I do believe most actions associated with Thaumaturgy look magical, but there are a lot of paths and for the most part I skim through to get a good idea of them.

And it is certainly not easier for me to write, especially when you spend hours perfecting the old english used in the dialogue. It isn't just regular speech. I had to literally study for this to be on par with Shakespearean works. I mean, there are literally TONS of well delved into themes in this story, it is by no means at all a bad one. There are references to real places in the WOD Universe, there are allusions to characters in our CURRENT chronicle.

Thank you for your feedback.

You'll have to wait for a moderator to analyze this and give their verdict.
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Character Profiles / Re: Vanessa Hamilton
« Last post by Tommy on January 16, 2017, 01:08:40 PM »
i just can't wait to start murdering vampires over breaking the simple law of no erp

does that entail all forms of sex Flavberg? the reason I ask is because I had a character that was taken advantage of by a vampire.

if i were a racemod and i'd see you erp as a vampire with other vampires or humans without a valid reason such as feeding or manipulating

i'd fucking remove that race dude

this isn't twilight vampire fantasy
why? can't a vampyr have a daddy dom relationship with a mortal? toreadors are into this shit
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Character Profiles / Re: Eun Seung
« Last post by Mkjmn on January 16, 2017, 01:02:28 PM »
Cool CP give it a roleplay for a while and your character is going to br cool.
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Character Profiles / Re: Kristoffer
« Last post by Jackiee on January 16, 2017, 01:01:25 PM »
nice rip off of christopher.
kristoffer the homemade brand version of christopher.

i bet it costs more too
and also tastes nothing like the original.

holy fuck lol

holy flame
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