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Crow [WIP]
« on: February 11, 2016, 05:26:33 AM »

BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Hunter Cynesige
Nicknames: Crow.
Affiliation: Independent.
Native Language: English.
Date of birth: 25th of January, 1170.
Place of birth: England.
Strengths: Confidence, survivor, believes in protecting his friends.



PERSONALITY
Nature: Survivor.
Beliefs: None.
Personality: Doesn't trust most people around him, he could make a few friends but it's rare to trust someone. He's also straightforward.



FAMILY
Marital status: Single.
Parents: Unknown.
Siblings: Unknown.
Relationship w/ siblings: None.
Relationship w/ parents: None.
Sexual orientation: Does it fucking matter?
Children: Nein.

RELATIONS

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[ooo] - Enemy: Dislike, distrust, hate.
[ooo] - Neutral: no judgement yet, just met.
[ooo] - Friendly: Like, love, adore, would die for.
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Cal:"I gotta' say, at first when I met him, I thought he was another paranoid mage who hates my kind for what we are, but then I realized he's reasonable, smart, loyal and would never stab you in the back, I'm glad I've met someone like him and I really am happy I've got myself such a friend".
April:"Never imagined to see hookers in the lupine race, meh, fuck her".
Lena:"A disrespectful bitch who's trying so hard to be a badass, in the end she will get her ass kicked by someone".
Mary:"I don't know much about her but she's neutral and causes no harm, I believe Cal considers her a friend, but for me I don't trust many people"
Sheriff Caernwolf:"Well he's neutral I guess, he knows about my kind, he knows about me and I don't know how he found out, but I prefer to be cautious around him."
Lily: "I don't know much about her, but she's cool".
Charlie:"Well, he's my boss, head of ES, he's a powerful archmage. He said that he has always trusted many of my kind and that he doesn't hate me for being a kindred, the guy is cool but I still need more time to know more about him and trust him".
Stephen:"I like the way he's thinking, he's a nice guy and all, but I just met him, gonna need more time"

Races
Vampires: Most of my kind are total dicks, but some of them can turn out to be good friends who will back you up. Since I came to Red County only two of them were reasonable while the rest were a bunch of losers who wanted fight everything in their way".
Werewolves: "Fuck them"
Angels: "Yeah fuck them too"
Feras: "Well I had many encounters with them and these encounters have all ended up with bloody fights, they are no different than wolvies but, since I arrived to red county I met only one, the Aedeen guy and he's cool, I guess?"
Hybrids: "Yeah some of them are bitchy and keep whining about being ashamed of what happened to them and that they should have suicided, while some of them embrace their new nature and just live alone, I kinda' feel sorry for them, they can't figure out where they belong".
Demons: "Most of them are heartless fuckers who wanna spread chaos and some of them care for humans like Lily for example, I wonder if Lucy really exists?."
Hunters:".................................Just....no".
Mages:"Most of them are not bad at all and can be friendly but some of them like that crazyass bitch Mason have a lot of grudge against my kind. I would totally avoid fighting one of them it's ninety percent my demise so no thanks".


PHYSICAL/APPEARANCE
Ethnicity: Caucasian.
Race: Vampire, kindred, bloodsucker.
Weight: Ninty two KG.
Body Type: Muscled and averagely bulky.
Eye Color: brown.
Height: 175 CM.
Distinguishable features: Average, bit of a long brown hair, usually has a blank expression.

Appearance: In his mid-twenties, usually walking around in a hoodie. Has grey eyes, medium-long brown hair, black jeans, a pair of black leather gloves.

Forms
-Fight Form:-
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-Mist Form:-
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-Flight Form:-
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-War-Form:-
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Credits to Rotwood for the format, thanks mate.
« Last Edit: February 13, 2016, 09:46:00 PM by Leo »

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2016, 05:27:06 AM »
Reserved.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2016, 06:23:08 AM »
Dont copy my forms idea and then not add me to the friends list, its consider rape in certain countries ask Wade.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2016, 09:56:52 AM »
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the rest were a bunch of losers who wanna fight everything in their way.

*cough*

profile still has too much of the word "fuck" compared to the other profiles
and still has that feeling of "me vs the world"

9/11

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2016, 10:34:55 AM »
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the rest were a bunch of losers who wanna fight everything in their way.

*cough*

profile still has too much of the word "fuck" compared to the other profiles
and still has that feeling of "me vs the world"

9/11
Well they are in quotes, maybe I should add 18+ to the title xD
about the "me vs the world" Well, not really, my char doesn't try to kill anyone or try to be offensive, as you can see his nature is "Survivor". If he has no choice but to fight then so be it, and if it's a mage or a hunter then it's unlikely for my char to get involved or try to get offensive with them. Many vamps and I don't wanna say most try to pick fights with mages without caring about their characters lives or valuing their characters lives.
Hunter isn't invincible or anything but in the quotes... it's just his personality that's all.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2016, 10:37:16 AM »
o
i see

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #6 on: February 11, 2016, 10:43:18 AM »
Sure has all the features of a 1100s man. 1.75m, he must've been a giant back then. GG.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2016, 11:00:07 AM »
Sure has all the features of a 1100s man. 1.75m, he must've been a giant back then. GG.
haha yeah
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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #8 on: February 11, 2016, 11:42:49 AM »
Sure has all the features of a 1100s man. 1.75m, he must've been a giant back then. GG.

Uh.

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Middle Ages

Perhaps surprisingly, research by a team from Ohio State University suggests that people living in the Middle Ages between the ninth and 11th centuries were taller than those living in the early 19th century. Using skeleton evidence from Europe, the team found that average height decreased from 68.27 inches in the Middles Ages to a low of 65.75 inches in the 1600s and 1700s. According to team leader Richard Steckel, increased height in the Middle Ages is due to warmer than average temperatures in Europe during this period, extending the growing period by up to four weeks each year and ensuring improved supplies of food. People also lived what we would consider very stationary lives, so outbreaks of communicable disease did not have the opportunity to spread over large areas.

Why'd you even say that? It's a myth that middle ages people were short. In fact, how'd you expect all those men to carry quite a heavy armor on themselves and wield heavy swords with higher efficiency than modern people, while being short?

OT: Profile is neat, but grammatical mistakes are turning off, sort of. It kinda needs general improvement on descriptions and whatnot, dunno, could be just my opinion.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #9 on: February 11, 2016, 11:48:06 AM »
Sure has all the features of a 1100s man. 1.75m, he must've been a giant back then. GG.

Uh.

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Middle Ages

Perhaps surprisingly, research by a team from Ohio State University suggests that people living in the Middle Ages — between the ninth and 11th centuries — were taller than those living in the early 19th century. Using skeleton evidence from Europe, the team found that average height decreased from 68.27 inches in the Middles Ages to a low of 65.75 inches in the 1600s and 1700s. According to team leader Richard Steckel, increased height in the Middle Ages is due to warmer than average temperatures in Europe during this period, extending the growing period by up to four weeks each year and ensuring improved supplies of food. People also lived what we would consider very stationary lives, so outbreaks of communicable disease did not have the opportunity to spread over large areas.

Why'd you even say that? It's a myth that middle ages people were short. In fact, how'd you expect all those men to carry quite a heavy armor on themselves and wield heavy swords with higher efficiency than modern people, while being short?

OT: Profile is neat, but grammatical mistakes are turning off, sort of. It kinda needs general improvement on descriptions and whatnot, dunno, could be just my opinion.
Yeah I got your point, I made it in a hurry while rping with rotwood and the rest, still working on it even now.
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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #10 on: February 11, 2016, 12:00:44 PM »
Sure has all the features of a 1100s man. 1.75m, he must've been a giant back then. GG.

Uh.

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Middle Ages

Perhaps surprisingly, research by a team from Ohio State University suggests that people living in the Middle Ages between the ninth and 11th centuries were taller than those living in the early 19th century. Using skeleton evidence from Europe, the team found that average height decreased from 68.27 inches in the Middles Ages to a low of 65.75 inches in the 1600s and 1700s. According to team leader Richard Steckel, increased height in the Middle Ages is due to warmer than average temperatures in Europe during this period, extending the growing period by up to four weeks each year and ensuring improved supplies of food. People also lived what we would consider very stationary lives, so outbreaks of communicable disease did not have the opportunity to spread over large areas.

Why'd you even say that? It's a myth that middle ages people were short. In fact, how'd you expect all those men to carry quite a heavy armor on themselves and wield heavy swords with higher efficiency than modern people, while being short?

OT: Profile is neat, but grammatical mistakes are turning off, sort of. It kinda needs general improvement on descriptions and whatnot, dunno, could be just my opinion.

It isn't a myth. At all. Regional and temporal physical differences are very much real.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #11 on: February 11, 2016, 12:06:05 PM »
I tried googling out of curiosity, about most information out there states that they were perhaps just slightly shorter (average man going about 170 cm's in height, whereas we're closer to 175 and/or 180+ cm's). As much as I understand google and internet aren't always right, I doubt literally every page is lying.

Or maybe I'm just missing some points from you, dunno'.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #12 on: February 11, 2016, 12:07:35 PM »
I tried googling out of curiosity, about most information out there states that they were perhaps just slightly shorter (average man going about 170 cm's in height, whereas we're closer to 175 and/or 180+ cm's). As much as I understand google and internet aren't always right, I doubt literally every page is lying.

Or maybe I'm just missing some points from you, dunno'.

(tfw beginning to derail gonna stop)

Go to a museum.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #13 on: February 11, 2016, 12:38:20 PM »
So, there's loads of issues with character development but one character's height is being treated like you gave the middle finger to the Queen.

Quit nitpicking.

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Re: Crow [WIP]
« Reply #14 on: February 11, 2016, 12:39:35 PM »
ye men its gotta be a bad char cause he aint short enough

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