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Offline Ahmed_Abdelaziz

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My story part 3: Hope.
« on: August 10, 2016, 11:21:52 PM »
Hello.
Before you see this check the last two parts first.
 The officers brought me some food before they leave,after they left one of the workers came inside she took out a guava from the food bag then she started feeding me
""Come on eat!""The worker said.
I felt that she is feeding a dog and  I was suffocating.
then she just left.
That was very painful for me so I just went in a deep sleep from the pain
4 AM:daybreak
""Wake up Ahmed wake up.""unknown guy said
Then I looked at him then I found that fat   ding guy ,I looked at his left and I found his worker badge.
his name was : Quinn Jefferson.
He had a weird smile like he is up for somehing bad and the saliva was dripping from his mouth.
""Hello Ahmed Iam here to have some fun"" Quinn says.
I didn't know what did he mean but When I got old I understood that this means rapping.
He was fumbling my body with  a weird way then he started kissing me in my body.
*You know what happened next I don't have to continue :3*
Then he just left with his crime.
I wanted to scream and run from him but I couldn't.
Now Iam a dead body,but Iam a dead body that feels everything around him,No one protects me,Iam just a prey for these monsters.

Next morning:
One of the workers came to feed me
she was feekding me a very raw food then I heard this conversation between two other workers
""Where did Quinn go?"" W1 says
""To another shelter"" W2 says
""Why?""W1 says
""He had some problems with the  director"" *The boss* w2 says
""Do you know what is the problems?
No but I didn't like that asshole he wasn't comfortable.
""Why?""
""I didn't like him he was a prick""
""Yeah""
I was happy becuase I will be safe now then I heard someone.
12 PM: Sleeping
""Ahmed!""Unknown voice says
Then I looked behind me and saw my dad
"",Dad!""
I ran to him then I hugged him
""Dad I thought you left me""
""I will never leave you Ahmed I will always be a part of you.""
""Iam sorry but I have to go.""
""Why dad? they did bad things to me""
""You have to defend yourself""
""But how ? I can't move or talk""
""You hav eto wake up Ahmed.""
""I can't""
""YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP AHMED!""
I said with a low voice:But I can't
""Are you going to let Ocean escape with his crime?!""
""NO!""
""ARE YOU GOING TO LET THE WORLD ESCSPR AFTER WHAT HE DID TO YOU?!""
""NO!""
""THEN WAKE UP WAKE UP WAKE UP! YOU ARE NOT WEAK YOU CAN WAKE UP!
I woke up from my dream
""What the?!"" I said
""I can move and talk!""
My dad gave me my body back
He gave me my voice
I went  outside there was 2 workers standing
""He is moving!""
Then they took me to the doctor
""You have to exercise to gain your powers again"" Doc says.
""For how much?""
""Around  1 year""
then he left
I was so happy that I can move and talk again
All I have to do now is exercise until Iam good enough.
To be continued in part 4
Hope you liked it
Stay tuned for part 4 lunatics!
I know it was short But I promise part 4 will be long! 😃
« Last Edit: August 11, 2016, 12:56:44 AM by Ahmed_Abdelaziz »

Offline Ahmed_Abdelaziz

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Re: My story part 3: Hope.
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2016, 11:25:03 PM »
I know it wasn't real good but I wanted to put this part.
part 4 will be better and longer I promise
« Last Edit: August 11, 2016, 01:38:29 PM by Ahmed_Abdelaziz »

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Re: My story part 3: Hope.
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2016, 07:45:51 AM »
Nice, Keep 'em coming.
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Re: My story part 3: Hope.
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2016, 12:28:24 PM »

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Re: My story part 3: Hope.
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2016, 04:44:00 PM »
Dude, wow. Amazing.
תן לה אצבע היא תמיד תרצה את כל היד
כבר הפכה לי את הבית גן חיות מחמד
בואי נטרוף את החיים הם כמו תותים מתוקים ותודה לאלוהים
כבר השתגעתי כולם אמרו לי
לך שקד כבר תוציא לה טבעת
לפני שהיא נוסעת לפני שהיא בורחת
היא לא תחכה כל החיים

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Re: My story part 3: Hope.
« Reply #5 on: August 22, 2016, 08:53:53 PM »
Quote from: Ahmed, wake up
*You know what happened next I don't have to continue :3*
We will wait for Leon the Men Of ForMat to approve the format.
What is the roll for spotting a stone?, and the diff too.
And what the successes to get (One stone, Two stones, Three stones and so on)?
Thanks.