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My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« on: August 31, 2016, 05:22:00 PM »
Hey.
Sorry for being late was busy with my life.

Note:Read the previous parts before reading this part. 





                                                    One year later.
10 PM:In the transportation car.
After one year of exercise I am back on my feet again.
With the end of the paralysis I  will be deported to a new shelter.
11:30 PM :The happiness shelter.
Finally I am here,the  shelter was surrounded with alot of big fences,they have a very nice park here.
I had a worker from the old shelter with me.
''Come on move it.''The worker said.
there was a skinny lady with a red hair and blue eyes in front of the gate.
''Welcome to the shelter Ahmed!''She said with a smile on her face.
''Ahmed this is your shelter's new manager: Mrs.Victoria Chase.''The worker said.
''Hi.''I said.
''He looks so cute and quite.''Victoria said.
''Yeah Ahmed was one of the best children in the old shelter,alright my job is done here good bye.''He said.
''Good bye.''Victoria said.
''Come with me Ahmed I will give you a little tour in the happiness shelter.''Victoria said.
 And soon I will find out that there is no thing called ''Happiness'' here.
''Get in your dormitory''The worker said.
Then I entered with her in the dormitory,it was full of sleeping children on double beds.
Then she pointed on one of the beds.
''Sleep on the ground floor of the bed.''The worker said.
''Justin this is your new friend ''Ahmed'' take care of him''The worker said.
''Okay.''Justin said.
Then I dropped my self on the bed.
''How old are you?''Justin said.
''Eleven,you?''I said.
''Same.''Justin said.
''Did someone sleep here before me?''I said.
''Yep.''Justin said.
''Who and where is he or she?''I said.
''Her name was Kate Marsh last week she attempted to escape but she got caught by Victoria and the workers,then she didn't come back after this.''J said.
''Why?''I said.
''Don't know maybe she died while trying to escape or Victoria killed her I don't know.''J said.
''What?! Killed her?''I said.
''Yeah man Victoria can do it you don't know her,she might seem nice at the beginning but then you will find out that she is a monster.''J said.
''Holy shit.''I said.
''Let's just sleep now we have  a big day tomorrow so good night!''J said.
''Good night.''I said.
1 Pm:Morning.
''Wake up kids!''The worker said with a loud voice.
''Come on wake up Ahmed.''She said while shaking me with her hands.
''What do you want?''I said.
''It's breakfast now move your ass to the cafeteria.''She said.
''What ever.''I said.
''Come on Ahmed we gotta hurry.''Justin said.
Then we went outside the dormitory and we saw a shitload of kids racing to the cafeteria.
''Come on man or we won't get any food!''Justin said while grabbing my hand.
Then we ran to the cafeteria.
The cafeteria was full of kids  and there was a corner that a cook was serving food there.
The kids was fighting for the food from him.
''Holy shit man what the hell is this?!''I said.
''This is how you get food,now move your ass we gotta struggle for food!''J said.
Then we ran into them and we took the food as quick as possible.
''Let's take this table,eat quick we still have a long day.''J said.
''What the hell man the food is so old and the table is fucked up too.''I said.
''You gotta live with these shit now eat!''J said.
''What ever man.''I said.
                                             One hour later.
2 PM:The residence.
''Clean up new guy.''The same worker said.
Now I found out that her name is Joyce.
She grabbed me with a violence way then she gave me a dirty rag and a water bucket then she said with a loud voice:Clean this shit up!
''What the hell do you mean this isn't my job!''I said.
''Yes it is now move your ass and clean up!''Joyce said.
Then I started cleaning while she sets on her lazy ass reading a fucking newspaper.
Finally after 3 hours of cleaning.
''Fuck my clothes are so dirty now.''I said.
Then I went to her and said:Done.
''Let me see.''Joyce said.
''This spot isn't clean''She said while pointing at a dirty spot.
''It's around 3 years old how am I supposed to clean it?''I said.
''You will clean it if you stop being lazy.''Joyce said.
''Lazy? *Laughs* Will  I am not the one who sat on her ass while making a little 11 years old kid do her job!''I said.
''Why  don't you try cleaning it?''I said.
''You are telling me to clean up!?''Joyce said.
''Will I didn't ask the queen of England  to clean up it's  your job!''I said.
''Let's see what Mrs.Victoria says!''She said then she dragged me with a violence way to Victoria's office.
She pushed me inside the office while I fell on the ground.
''She is refusing to clean up and she is telling me to do her job!!''Joyce said with a loud voice.
''What?!''Victoria said.
Then Victoria stood up and pushed me up.
''Is this right?!''Victoria said.
''Yes but.....''I said..
Then she slapped me before I even finish and I started crying.
''Don't ever do this again!''She said that while screaming at me.
''O---Okay.''' I said.
''Now stop crying and go clean this dirty spot.''She said.
''Ok.''I said.
''Joyce don't leave her until she finishes her job.''Victoria said.
Then we went back to the residence.
''Now do your job.''Joyce said.
After one hour of cleaning it.
''Done.''I said.
''Now go to the classroom.''Joyce said.
8 PM:after the classroom.
Then we went to the cafeteria again for lunch,just the same as the breakfast.
''Ahmed.''Justin said while we was sitting on the table.
''Yeah?''
''You know this kid?''He said while pointing at someone.
''No.''
''His name is Nathan Prescott,he calls him self ''Crazy 8'' He is the biggest bully here.''J said.
''Bully huh? I don't care.''I said.
''Don't mess with him I heard that he has a Knife and bullys here aren't like schools.''J said.
''Yeah alright I will try.'' I said.
After a long fucking day we went to sleep.
11:30:The dormitory
I heard some foot steps it was a worker.
''Justin,what is that worker doing?''I said.
''He is cleaning up.''J said.
''In this time? Really?''I said.
''Yeah he does that everyday''J said.
''What ever man this shelter is a curse on us.''I said.
''I know let's just sleep.''I said.
Then I went into a deep sleep while wishing that I don't wake up again.
I have an anger that the world cannot understand.
I have alot of pain inside me that  doesn't have any cure.
I have a revenge inside me,every day I count the seconds,minutes,hours,days,weeks,Months and years waiting for the moment of Revenge.
                                     Five months later
After 5 months in this shit hole,every day is the same, Morning is night,night is morning, every thing is the same until this day came.
Here I am cleaning up the kitchen then something fell on the ground,it was an apple in this shit hole.
''So they keep the good food for them and they give us the old food,Fuckers.''I said.
Then I took the apple from the ground and before I take a bite I heard some one saying behind me:Give me the apple.
I turned around then I saw Nathan,I hid the apple behind me then said:No.
''I said....Give. Me. The. Apple.''Nathan said.
''I said No.''I said.
Then he took out his knife and grabbed me from my hand.
''Fuck off!''I said then I pushed him with both hands a very hard push and his back head Crashed into the wall real hard.
''Oh fuck!'' I said.
Then I ran to him shaking him to wake him up.
''Oh shit he is bleeding,God help me!''I said.
I couldn't help him,he lost alot of blood then he died.
''Fuck I just killed someone.''I said.
''I gotta clean this shit up.''
Then I looked around until I saw a big bag,then I dragged his body inside the bag and closed it.
''Now let's get rid of the blood.''
I started cleaning as quick as possible then I dropped the rag in the garbage dump and I emptied the water bucket in the sewers,then I washed my hands.
''Ahmed.''Some one said.
I quickly turned around looking behind me,it was Joyce.
''Uhhh hey Joyce.''I said.
''What are you doing here?''Joyce said.
''I am cleaning.''
''Hmmmm alright finish this then go to the Classroom.''Joyce said.
''Ok.''I said.
Then she left.
Finally I ate the apple.
I had to kill Nathan or he would've killed me if I didn't.
That's why they say Kill or be killed.
8 PM: The next day at the park.
I was sitting on one of the benches thinking.
Then a girl came to me and sat next to me.
She was a black tall girl,around 15-16 years old,ugly hair.
''What's your name kid?''She said.
''Ahmed,you?''
''Amy.''
''I have an escape plan.''Amy said.
''What?!''I said with a surprised face.
''An escape plan,let me tell you the plan.''Amy said.
''Go on.''I said.
''When everyone sleeps and that worker comes inside your dormitory sneak to his detergents  cart and hide inside it,then I will take the cart and go to the garbage dump,we will climb it then we will jump to the fence,one of the teachers will be waiting outside.''Amy said.
''Jump to the fence? those fences are so fucking high plus a teacher? how do you know she won't snitch?''I said.
''I used to work for her before I get here,she wants a little kid like you to work for her too.''Amy said.
''Let me think.''
''There is no thinking about this everyone wants to escape.''Amy said.
Should I just end my life like Maxine did? Or should I keep trying to survive?
''I am in.''I said.
''Alright don't forget it's tonight bye.''Amy said.
''Bye.''I said.
12 PM:The dormitory.
Everyone is sleeping.
''Here comes the worker.''I  said with a very low voice.
''Wait...Wait...wait..Now.''I said with a low voice.
Then I quickly ran to the cart and hid in it.
5 minutes later.
The cart started moving quickly.
''Hey kid.''Amy said while peeking inside the cart.
''Fuck,I thought you are the worker.''I said.
''Shut up now focus.''Amy said.
5 minutes later at the garbage dump.
''Get your ass out.''Amy said.
''Come on I will jump and offer you a hand.''Amy said.
Then she jumped then I jumped with her help.
''Alright this jump will be hard for you kid so I will jump first.''Amy said.
''1.......2......3....Now!''Amy said.
Then she jumped and I jumped after her.
''Oh fuck Iam gonna fall!''I said.
''You are so fucking heavy!''She said.
''HEY!''A worker said with a loud voice.
''VICTORIA,TWO KIDS ARE TRYING TO ESCAPE!''The worker said.
Then we saw a shitload of workers rushing to us,Victoria was running with them.
''Fuck I can't lift you!''Amy said.
Then I fell off.
''NOOO!''Amy said while screaming.
I fell on my leg and I broke it.
I was barely awake.
''Fuck I gotta leave.''Amy said.
''JOYCE TAKE TWO WORKERS WITH YOU AND CHASE THE BITCH,LEAVE AHMED FOR ME!''Victoria said with a very loud voice.
Then they started chasing Amy,I don't know they caught her or no.
''Uhhhhh.''I said.
''You are fucking dead Ahmed!''Victoria said then I went unconscious.

                                    The end.
« Last Edit: August 31, 2016, 05:24:07 PM by Ahmed_Abdelaziz »

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2016, 10:31:47 PM »
Patiently waiting for erp scene with Victoria.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #2 on: September 14, 2016, 09:08:51 AM »
Patiently waiting for erp scene with Victoria.
Go watch porn

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2016, 03:27:44 PM »
Patiently waiting for erp scene with Victoria.
Go watch porn
Already. Porn without storyline and ending is not porn.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2016, 06:09:51 AM »
I am clapping very very slowly

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2016, 08:12:00 AM »
Patiently waiting for erp scene with Victoria.
Go watch porn
He is not allowed to do that, he is rather a erp fan.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2016, 07:20:34 PM »
Still waiting.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2017, 02:17:04 AM »
There's no part 5?
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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #8 on: January 25, 2017, 09:16:50 AM »
very eerie and interesitng stor...
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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #9 on: January 26, 2017, 04:23:12 PM »
Am i missing something or is this supposed to sound straight out of Life is Strange? Either way i really like this.
in addition to the above I'm smarter than you so if this is an argument I win.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #10 on: January 26, 2017, 04:32:50 PM »
fuck that story made me so curious, that I want part five.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #11 on: January 27, 2017, 08:30:12 PM »
I will finish it, w/e.

Victoria approached half alive Ahmed, workers took him and other kids to the wall. They took their Berettas and M4, shooting Ahmed, Justin and Kate down. Ahmed feels instant hot feeling into his back, falling onto his knees and then at his stomach, accepting his fate. He heard Victoria vicuosly laughing.... That was last  he heard in his short but interesting life.

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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #12 on: February 01, 2017, 08:53:37 AM »
I will finish it, w/e.

Victoria approached half alive Ahmed, workers took him and other kids to the wall. They took their Berettas and M4, shooting Ahmed, Justin and Kate down. Ahmed feels instant hot feeling into his back, falling onto his knees and then at his stomach, accepting his fate. He heard Victoria vicuosly laughing.... That was last  he heard in his short but interesting life.
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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #13 on: February 01, 2017, 09:47:46 AM »
guess he got kilLED by killer
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Re: My story part 4: Kill or be killed.
« Reply #14 on: February 06, 2017, 07:35:54 PM »
It Must be named Kill and be Killed.
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