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Offline Jeffrey Gain

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Why.
« on: February 13, 2018, 01:52:50 AM »
(Why, Why me? I wondered, as I ran through the ally-way, shaking in fear as the cold rain began cleaning the blood of my clothing and face. (I'm going crazy!) I thought as I kept running and running, and RUNNING.

Now, you are probably wondering who am I and what have I gotten myself in to, or maybe you don't, the thing is, I'll tell you anyway.

My age isn't important nor is my name, besides in a few days you'll forget about my story and move on with your life, which Is why I can't be bothered to go into the details, not that it matters anyway, by the time you are reading this I'll be dead. So here it is, my story;

I was only a teenager, living with my parents in a small town somewhere in America. It was an ordinary day, and just like any other day I went to hell, I meant to say-... School, yeah. Anyway after my seven hours in hell was over I finally came home.

 As usual I saw the pale lady leave our house as I was reaching it. But something was different...
(She looks colder then usual..) I thought as I entered my house, after doing so my nostrils were filled by a particular smell, a disgusting and off-putting smell. (The smell of a fresh corpse..) I thought as I quickly ran to my parents room, and what I saw next, changed my life... Forever.

I saw my mother laying on the floor with various injuries, dead, while my father was laying beside her with a gun in his hand... (This c-can't be happening!) I thought to myself as I stumbled back in disbelief until I fell down, shocked..

"T-Take the gun.." My father said, as he reached his hand out to me while holding the gun in his hand, he was barely breathing I could see the tremendous pain he was suffering with just a gaze, I couldn't believe it, I didn't want to believe it, but I reached for his hand and took the gun anyway, as I began shedding tears. (T-This is a joke, right?! A nightmare!) I thought to myself, as I pushed myself up only to hear a cold and dreaded whisper enter my ear, "Die." I heard, as I turned around only to see the pale lady behind me, staring, right into me. (I cant take this, not now, not ever!) I thought as I ran past the pale lady out of the house, into an ally-way...

I have ran for so long, I couldn't feel my feet, the emotional pain was too much, yet the physical one was noticeable too. I got inside an abandoned building, after some time I found a room filled with papers, blank papers and alongside them a few pencils. And that's how I wrote you this, you may chose to believe me or not, not that I'll care, I'm dead.

I cocked the gun after having finished my writing, I pinned the  barrel onto my head, and after a few seconds of shouting I pulled the trigger, and ended it all, the pain, the suffering, its gone. My insides splattered over the wall on which I was leaning on as I took my own life, the building in which I took my life collapsed, burying my body, my story, everything with it. And to  this day I still wonder, why? But right now, the thing I wish for the most, is to meet my family, in a better world..
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Re: Why.
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2018, 02:08:00 AM »
rip mom


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Re: Why.
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2018, 07:26:11 AM »

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Re: Why.
« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2018, 07:55:38 AM »
still worst story than twilight

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Re: Why.
« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2018, 09:47:01 AM »
still worst story than twilight

u no apprecite the art buddy


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Re: Why.
« Reply #5 on: February 13, 2018, 10:20:19 AM »
very good, really enjoyed it!

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Re: Why.
« Reply #6 on: February 13, 2018, 02:27:28 PM »
Well, its finished, hope you all enjoy, and if not..
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Re: Why.
« Reply #7 on: February 14, 2018, 12:35:49 AM »
Quote from: Mage The Ascension 20th Anniversary
“We suffer because we believe we’ll suffer; if and when we adjust our attitude, the world spills out its blessings upon us.”


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Re: Why.
« Reply #8 on: February 14, 2018, 07:59:55 AM »
Keep it coming.
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Re: Why.
« Reply #9 on: February 14, 2018, 06:11:57 PM »
Thanks for all the support everyone, if you are wondering when and why I wrote this story i'll tell you now;

- WHEN; It was around 4:00 AM I believe and I wrote it on my phone which is why you may find noticable writing mistakes.

- WHY; At night my mind tends to go creative instead of shutting down, and so I thought about all the Hunters in WoD that pull through and live on, but reality is, not all of them do.
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Re: Why.
« Reply #10 on: February 14, 2018, 06:34:35 PM »
At night my mind tends to go creative istead of shutting down

thats weird half time i see ur mind gets shut down mid way sentence

when youre natively english but cant speak it

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« Reply #11 on: February 14, 2018, 07:28:36 PM »
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Re: Why.
« Reply #12 on: February 20, 2018, 09:07:41 AM »
At night my mind tends to go creative istead of shutting down

thats weird half time i see ur mind gets shut down mid way sentence
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god help me
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Re: Why.
« Reply #13 on: February 20, 2018, 10:33:14 AM »
how was he able to describe his final moments if he was writing on a piece of paper.

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Re: Why.
« Reply #14 on: February 20, 2018, 11:12:01 AM »
how was he able to describe his final moments if he was writing on a piece of paper.
Thats how his mind tends to go creative. Yours should too....
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