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Offline Jeffrey Gain

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The First and Last Attempt
« on: February 16, 2018, 03:08:35 PM »
ACT I; The Assembly

It starts here, in an unknown desert... The Thirteen clans have assembled in order to kill the original, to kill Caine. Carrying weapons and various equipment in order to take him down, the Thirteen clans were lead by a man called Marcus Reinfield a 5th generation vampire who was able to track down Caine's current location by assembling various elders with incredible information and powers, forcing them to combine their powers in order to track down Caine, and so they did. Now an army with over 1000 vampires is moving across a desert, attempting to track down Caine.

ACT II; The Hunt

The army was only a few kilometers away, so they picked up their paste and began running faster towards their target anxious for battle, even though many knew they were heading towards their death, they had hope that they could beat Caine, and gain incredible power by taking his blood. The plan was simply to distribute the blood of Caine to the few elders that were in the army, but the lower generations had no idea of this. Being a leader isn't easy, but being led is. And so the army finally caught up to Caine, he stood tall in front of them, gazing down at them from a small hill, as the desert was filled with them. Caine squinted his eyes, wearing light body armor he pierced through all of them with his glowing eyes and revealed fangs, breaking their wills mentally with a simple gaze..

ACT III; The Battle

Caine grew bored, so he leaped off the hill , the sand withered around him, as Caine began running towards his opponents-... His opponents grew more anxious and anxious praying to their self-proclaimed gods and ideals, they shouted at him out of anxiety while running towards him with lots of melee weapons, guns were not used, as the army feared they might miss and start killing themselves.
Caine ran through the front like a bull on steroids, not getting a scratch on his armor, as he dodged each and every  attack the front threw at him. After he got closer to the middle, he began fighting, with moderate speed for now. A trio came at Caine, one with a katana, one with a knife, and one with no weapon at all, the one with a katana leaped at Caine, attempting to strike him from the side, while the one with the blade attempted to thrust his knife into Caine's other side, while the third came from the sand,
attempting to grapple Caine by his feet. Caine saw through all of their attacks, he leaped up to dodge to the grapple, while kicking the other two away, knocking them back. As Caine dropped down he forcefully dropped his feet onto the kindred below him, smashing his skull to bits. Caine then proceeded to cut down the army from the middle, beating them, dodging them, taking their weapons and using them against themselves, at one point a duo dashed at Caine with a plan, one took the front, attempting to cut Caine down with his katana, while the other attempted to thrust Caine from the back with his blade,
Caine parried the attack from the front, but he miscalculated the speed of his opponent that was trying to strike him from the behind, but Caine was not hit, as he tilted his head towards his opponent, making eye-contact he cast an illusion onto his opponent, freezing him in place, then punching him away into a sand hill. Eventually an Elder Lasombra decided to act in the battle, he formed shadow tentacles from the shadows of the solders in the front lines. The Elder sent the tentacles to grapple Caine, smashing some front-line vampires while doing so, but the tentacles couldn't begin to comprehend Caine's speed, Caine dashed at the Elder, with speed that seemed like teleportation, Caine kicked the Elder Lasombra away,
making him fly a kilometer or two due to the knock back. The army stood no chance, they were cut down faster and faster, from the middle, some solders attempted to run away, but Caine was prepared for that,
he, didn't allow survivors, as he summoned tentacles all around the battlefield, huge one's too, forming walls with the tentacles, any kindred that attempted to escape was smashed by the tentacles into nothing but ashes. Thirty minutes of the battle has passed, and yet nobody was able to even harm Caine, knives,
crossbow bolts were being thrown/shot at him, but Caine dodged, blocked and parried all attacks, no vampire stood a chance against Caine, the original, the Elders realized this during the battle, so they joined the front-lines to help, the first one to attack Caine was an Elder Brujah, who dashed at Caine with incredible speed, almost matching his. The Elder Brujah, used everything he got, sending a barrage of punches at Caine, while also attempting to sweep him down, then drop kicking him down after finishing.
Caine dodged the first three punches, but then counter-attacked, throwing the Brujah at the Elder Gangrel,
who attempted to approach Caine and fight him along-side the Elder Brujah, the Elder Gangrel was hit,
getting knocked away along-side the Elder Brujah who was on top of him due to the maneuver Caine performed. Time was passing, and with time the Elders started dying along-side the army which was shrinking every minute. Caine wasn't even using his true power, he was bored for centuries, so he used his physical powers for now. An hour passed, the army was wiped out, the Tentacles that formed a wall around the battlefield disappeared and Caine was enjoying his time, choking out the remaining vampire on the battlefield, Marcus Reinfield, Caine used Dominate on Marcus, breaking his will in a few seconds, finding out how he was found, Caine finished Marcus off, and left the battlefield with a smirk on his face.


ACT IV; The End

The battlefield was a clean desert at the start, but now, its a desert of blood, ashes and many weaponry.
The army failed, giving their all, using all the weaponry they had, they tried their best, but it wasn't enough, the only thing that remained in their place was their belongings, as their pitiful pale bodies turned to nothing but ashes, ever since this fight, no vampire attempted to track down Caine, or even get close to finding him..
« Last Edit: February 16, 2018, 03:24:15 PM by Jeffrey Gain »

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2018, 03:13:09 PM »
Wait, what?
Line 3: Minato is a dude with abilities and he can sometimes use his candles to roast Mephistos.

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #2 on: February 16, 2018, 03:34:27 PM »
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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #3 on: February 16, 2018, 03:39:30 PM »
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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #4 on: February 16, 2018, 03:41:18 PM »
what the fuck is this fan fiction? caine can kill all vampires with one move

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #5 on: February 16, 2018, 06:17:42 PM »
why does caine wear armor. . .

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #6 on: February 16, 2018, 06:34:41 PM »
Chill guys, let his image do the trick

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #7 on: February 16, 2018, 07:40:38 PM »
what the fuck is this fan fiction? caine can kill all vampires with one move

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #8 on: February 16, 2018, 07:50:57 PM »
lol
Quote from: Karthus
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“You fear what you do not understand and would turn away from a boon that is freely offered.”


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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #9 on: February 16, 2018, 08:12:11 PM »
what the fuck is this fan fiction? caine can kill all vampires with one move

well Caine be old asf, so he wanna have some fun with his prey

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #10 on: February 17, 2018, 12:39:47 PM »
See a body and the dream of the dead days
Following lost and blind
Living, far from here
Tomorrow is hard to find
And it seems like twenty-five years of
Promises and give me more
Scenes of a hand me down in
Dresses heard before
First and last and always:til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
Maybe it's not so easy
Maybe it's a way too long
Say, say you'll be by me
When the evidence comes along
See a body and the dream of the dead days
A following lost and blind
Cross my heart with silver
Here's the key behind
Seems like twenty-five years of
Ever after, ever more more more
Seems I wore this face for you
Far too long before
First and last and always: My calling, my time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #11 on: February 17, 2018, 06:19:23 PM »
See a body and the dream of the dead days
Following lost and blind
Living, far from here
Tomorrow is hard to find
And it seems like twenty-five years of
Promises and give me more
Scenes of a hand me down in
Dresses heard before
First and last and always:til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
Maybe it's not so easy
Maybe it's a way too long
Say, say you'll be by me
When the evidence comes along
See a body and the dream of the dead days
A following lost and blind
Cross my heart with silver
Here's the key behind
Seems like twenty-five years of
Ever after, ever more more more
Seems I wore this face for you
Far too long before
First and last and always: My calling, my time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine

what a poet.


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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #12 on: February 17, 2018, 09:16:09 PM »
See a body and the dream of the dead days
Following lost and blind
Living, far from here
Tomorrow is hard to find
And it seems like twenty-five years of
Promises and give me more
Scenes of a hand me down in
Dresses heard before
First and last and always:til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
Maybe it's not so easy
Maybe it's a way too long
Say, say you'll be by me
When the evidence comes along
See a body and the dream of the dead days
A following lost and blind
Cross my heart with silver
Here's the key behind
Seems like twenty-five years of
Ever after, ever more more more
Seems I wore this face for you
Far too long before
First and last and always: My calling, my time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine

this post beats my story by far, you are a true inspiration Lurker, I wish I could write so good one day too ;-;

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #13 on: February 17, 2018, 10:06:46 PM »
See a body and the dream of the dead days
Following lost and blind
Living, far from here
Tomorrow is hard to find
And it seems like twenty-five years of
Promises and give me more
Scenes of a hand me down in
Dresses heard before
First and last and always:til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
Maybe it's not so easy
Maybe it's a way too long
Say, say you'll be by me
When the evidence comes along
See a body and the dream of the dead days
A following lost and blind
Cross my heart with silver
Here's the key behind
Seems like twenty-five years of
Ever after, ever more more more
Seems I wore this face for you
Far too long before
First and last and always: My calling, my time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
First and last and always: 'til the end of time
First and last and always: Mine
Sisters of Mercy.

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Re: The First and Last Attempt
« Reply #14 on: February 18, 2018, 02:00:11 AM »
Can't wait for part two.